#1
http://patrickjennewein.dmusic.com/

enjoy , excuse some slipups, i wanted to make it as improvised as possible so i only did 2 takes, one for clean and one for overdrive.

For the synth I used reason. For the guitars I used a toneport ux2
My Gear:
Fender American Deluxe Stratocaster
Epiphone Sheraton II
Fender Blues Deluxe Reissue
Teese RMC Picture Wah
MXR Carbon Copy
Keeley Modded TS9
Korg Pitchblack
Schecter Omen 6
Dean Performer Acoustic

#2
anyone? i had high hopes for this piece
My Gear:
Fender American Deluxe Stratocaster
Epiphone Sheraton II
Fender Blues Deluxe Reissue
Teese RMC Picture Wah
MXR Carbon Copy
Keeley Modded TS9
Korg Pitchblack
Schecter Omen 6
Dean Performer Acoustic

#3
hey, you should get a soundclick so its easier for me to listen to your cool music.

anyways, the keyboard intro is very cool. the bass could use work. did you program it? the guitar is very nice, and i think the drums should be turned up a bit.

great guitar playing and overall vibe.

crit mine?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=8636189#post8636189
Too cool for a signature.
#4
thanks, i will try to get to ur crit today. I was wondering how could the bass use work? i mean im no bassist (i was using my bros bass) but i know i stayed in time
My Gear:
Fender American Deluxe Stratocaster
Epiphone Sheraton II
Fender Blues Deluxe Reissue
Teese RMC Picture Wah
MXR Carbon Copy
Keeley Modded TS9
Korg Pitchblack
Schecter Omen 6
Dean Performer Acoustic

#5
This is a pretty good song. The synth line does a good job starting and keeping the mood for it. The guitar work is nice with a great warm feel. Good transition when the overdrive line comes in. I can't really hear the drums and bass at all. Reminds me alot of David GIlmour's style of playing. Well done tho

CHeck out mine:
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=548975
#6
I know what he means about the bass, it's more tone then anything, but I can't put my finger on it, maybe it shouyld be quiter.

The backing track was nice and so was the chord progression. Good guitar playing, especially for improv, but you could do with being less restrained, you ought to put a little more emotion in it, and, it's not often i say this, but you could always use a little bit more speed hear and there

I think the song gets a little repative and boring (not your playing, just that it stays in the same mood or whatever throughout), so maybe some different sections? Or simply make it a little shorter.

Overall, good! Mind critting mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=545043
#7
listenin to it right now. i like the synth intro, sounds very professional. the song gives me a pink floyd division bell feeling. seems like u went a little bit too long with the mellow intro. kinda lost interest. but i like the lead work. good phrasing. definetly a gilmour type sound. keep it more fluent and itll sound even better. hmm, seems like u went on for a bit too long without switchin up the mood, or goin to some sort of climax. sounds really good tho. good playing

mind checkin mine out?
www.myspace.com/jonpaulstgermain