#1
While I sit in the classrooms
Geagraphy and Language Arts
It sucks how far away we sit apart
I wanna be closer so I can talk to you
And I pressume
That you wanna talk to me too
Because sometimes I catch you looking in my direction
To me, it's like a personall reflection
Cause I'll look at you and dream
And dream that you come up to me
You spill out your heart
But that's not reality
Though I'll to make it start
So I guess I have to get to know quickly

I need to check into the real world
And not let immagination get the best of me
Cause this is a girl I like and need to see
If she doesn't like me, or wants to be my girl

Your persoanlity is one of the best things about you
It's like listening to Lynyrd Skynyrd the first time or two
It could inciterate two boulders it's so strong
And it's unbelievable like Jonny Cash's songs
I could find a rose inside your beauty
You were a revelation of all things beautiful
And nothing on this earth is worthy
On top of all that, your attitude is just cool
I also lose my mind over your hair
When god wanted perfect hair, he pointed there
At your head where all your thoughts are fed
I just want to be with you
And that's what I said

I need to check into the real world
And not let immagination get the best of me
Cause this is a girl I like and need to see
If she doesn't like me, or wants to be my girl
#2
I really like that.
It's something I think we've all been through. I'm starting to get that way at the moment.
There are some good metaphors and stuff and you've managed to stay on the subject without being repetitive.
The things I don't like are the line about the boulders but it's not important, and also the one about the rose cos why would you need to look inside beauty to find something beautiful?
What I do like about it is how it's really written the way you'd probably want to say it to the said girl. So it's proper everyday language but well used and embellished.
A couple of typos in "geography" and "presume"

Good stuff mate.

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#3
Dude, really nice, I like But I gotta agree with Limey, I don't think the boulder and rose parts are that necessary. But very good, I like. It's very honest and up-front.
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#4
While I sit in the classrooms
Geagraphy and Language Arts
It sucks how far away we sit apart
I wanna be closer so I can talk to you
And I pressume
That you wanna talk to me too
Because sometimes I catch you looking in my direction
To me, it's like a personall reflection
Cause I'll look at you and dream
And dream that you come up to me
You spill out your heart
But that's not reality
Though I'll to make it start
So I guess I have to get to know quickly

I need to check into the real world
And not let immagination get the best of me
Cause this is a girl I like and need to see
If she doesn't like me, or wants to be my girl

Your persoanlity is one of the best things about you
It's like listening to Lynyrd Skynyrd the first time or two
You let someone know if something's wrong
And it's unbelievable like Jonny Cash's songs
When you walk in a room, you're the first thing I see
You were a revelation of all things beautiful
And nothing on this earth will ever be worthy
On top of all that, your attitude is just cool
I also lose my mind over your hair
When god wanted perfect hair, he pointed there
At your head where all your thoughts are fed
I just want to be with you
And that's what I said

I need to check into the real world
And not let immagination get the best of me
Cause this is a girl I like and need to see
If she doesn't like me, or wants to be my girl

Fixed.