#1
Here is a new song I'm working on. It's called Feels Like Home.

Here is a link to the audio...

Feels Like Home

Here are the lyrics...

Hold on for another year
I'm going down my dear
This is the wreckoning
I can feel it

This song's been overplayed
But I can't walk away
This is my downfall
I can feel it

What do you do
When your plans have fallen through
What do you do
What do you do

Chorus:
These are the things you ask
When nowhere feels like home
These are the thoughts you think
When your so sick of being alone
How do you cope with all the
sad songs on the radio
These are the things you ask
When nowhere feels like home

Hold on for another day
Things will get better they say
There goes another lie
I can feel it

My soul is so far gone
Can't you see come undone
This is the ending
I can feel it

What do you do
When your plans have fallen through
What do you do
What do you do

Chorus

Hold on for another year
I'm going down my dear
This is the wreckoning
I can feel it

Chorus

...tell me what you think.
#3
Quote by Antoniowashere
Here is a new song I'm working on. It's called Feels Like Home.

Here is a link to the audio...

Feels Like Home

Here are the lyrics...

Hold on for another year
I'm going down my dear
This is the wreckoning
I can feel it

This song's been overplayed
But I can't walk away
This is my downfall
I can feel it

What do you do
When your plans have fallen through
What do you do
What do you do



you can try alteration instead of repeating what do u do. it will sound better



Chorus:
These are the things you ask
When nowhere feels like home
These are the thoughts you think
When your so sick of being alone
How do you cope with all the
sad songs on the radio
These are the things you ask
When nowhere feels like home

line 4 delete "so" it hampers the flow a bit
instead of cope try something else like deal etc


Hold on for another day
Things will get better they say
There goes another lie
I can feel it

My soul is so far gone
Can't you see come undone
This is the ending
I can feel it

What do you do
When your plans have fallen through
What do you do
What do you do

Chorus

Hold on for another year
I'm going down my dear
This is the wreckoning
I can feel it

Chorus

...tell me what you think.


overall i like it. as a song it will do good
Hi
#5
Great sounding song. Song sounds great. I actually heard it as a pop song in my head. Don't know if you'd call it that though. Reading it I actually thought it would be a slower song, but hearing, the up tempo on it sounded a lot better. Keep 'em coming