Verse 1:
Stand back
Many emotions are running through me
I never even got to see your face
Its not like miracles just happen
To those who ask


Every time I look in the mirror
I was never able to tell if that was a mask
On my face

Verse 2

I look now and realize
My shelter was with you
Can’t let my body win the fight
Can’t let my mind win the race
But now I can tell
That there are more shattered
Pieces of my heart
Then that mirror

Last call for safety
And I’m having doubts
Last call for home
Just don’t look back
Last edited by thefoundationof at Mar 26, 2007,
This is really cool. Punctuation might be needed, but perhaps thats part of it. I really like "Its not like miracles just happen
To those who ask" Thats a really cool line. I've got a poem floating around called "My Answer" (Original Poem)" if you wanna crit it. I know I didnt fully crit yours, but there really isnt alot to say. Good Job.
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