#1
Hi there, I'm both new to this site and to songwriting. Even though i can play guitar ofc. but I was wondering if anyone could make up a tune for this song: (It's my first song so don't flame me plz )

It keeps on getting worse

[Verse]
What the **** did I say?
Nice reason to push me away
I feel worse and worse everyday
Way to go, crush my feelings

[Verse]
I should'a known better
You're far too good for me
I don't know what I though
How could I be so stupid?
I think ill just end it.

[Chorus]
Im standing outside freezing
The rain is falling down
Im ****ing tired of being picked on
Even though they say it gets worse before it gets better
But it just keeps on getting worse

[Bridge]
When will it get better?
When will it finally stop?
If nothing happens, i'm gonna give up
If it wont get better, i'll soon throw up

[Chorus]
Im standing outside freezing
The rain is falling down
Im ****ing tired of being picked on
Even though they say it gets worse before it gets better
But it just keeps on getting worse

(im actually thinking of putting in another verse before the bridge, but ill just see=) )
Thanks if you would help me and thanks for comments to the song

-Naw
#2
not so bad
maybe a bit too "loser" if i may say it
i would go for a plot twist in the ending
#3
gay
my gear:

Schecter Hellraiser Sunset FR
Line 6 spider 2: 212 combo 120 watt =\
Line 6 guitar port
EVH frankenstein painted Explorer
#4
read the FAQ's man (thread names)... trust me it's worth it... they're all new and pretty now!

EDIT: *reported*
Last edited by bassbeat77 at Mar 23, 2007,
#5
Oh yeah, by the way, if someone makes the melody to it, it's supposed to be a punk song.
Thanks for the idea subshadow, and bassbeat ill check it out. The only retardet person in this tread (till now) is taylorfrey