#1
Tell me what ya think!
Plz...

Darkest morning

Verse I
Lying in the cold,
Desiring Dawn,
Don’t know how Ill wait this long,

Verse II
Minute after minute,
as the hours go by,
you must listen for the incoming tide

Chorus
A shadow of darkness
Steals my soul
I fall to my knees,
And I lose control

Verse III
Sitting in the corner,
Waiting for life
Its been even longer than the darkest night

Chorus x2

Solo

Verse IV
Sitting by the fire
Ignoring the night,
I look into the sky and I see the light

Chorus x2

Outro

My Gear:
Epiphone Les Paul Custom
Takimine Classical Guitar
Yamaha Acoustic
Boss MD-2 Mega Distortion
Boss Compression sustainer
Boss Volume Pedal
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#2
very good. i like the comparison to night time, and how it goes throught the whole song.

one thing: is the outro instrumental, or what?
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#3
Quote by singer_johnny90
very good. i like the comparison to night time, and how it goes throught the whole song.

one thing: is the outro instrumental, or what?


Instrumental all the way bro!

My Gear:
Epiphone Les Paul Custom
Takimine Classical Guitar
Yamaha Acoustic
Boss MD-2 Mega Distortion
Boss Compression sustainer
Boss Volume Pedal
:stickpoke
#4
Sorry, but this song oozes of cliche and unoriginality. Either you're recycling old ideas that have been played out 65486765 times before or you're trying too hard to stay within a certain genre. Metal or depressing pop-punk, I'm assuming? All I can say is don't be afraid to step out of the box a little. The song wouldn't be as bad if it was delivered in an original way. But I seriously lost interest after the first couple lines. I immediately thought I had heard it all before, but I read on giving you the benefit of the doubt, and sure enough. I have heard it all before. When I listen to a song I want it to offer something I've never heard before. Maybe I am just being extremely picky, but I think this could use a lot of work.