Hey everyone here is a song i just wrote for guitar and bass...check it out?
it's not quite done needs anotehr chorus/verse and an outro any tips ? =)

Hmm, i don't know what your skill level is. But i'm going to take you as a novice. It wasn't bad, but it seemed like you learned more than your basic bar chord and are trying to show off. The chord progressions just didn't really do anything, they all sound pretty on their own but together in that order it just doesn't do anything.
I'd work on making everything flow together so it makes sense. Not too bad though dude.