#1
I wrote this a few minuites ago and I'm not sure what I think of it yet, but please read it and tell me what you think.

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Welcome to my town of misinformed creeps
Who sit back and sleep when the boats sinking deep
Who will stay with what they know, and stay tight
Because the lone winger on the left
Can only hit to the right

Maybe it’s not too bad to think everything’s alright
Maybe the biggest mistake is to think
If he’s able to think then he can fight

Ignorance, you’ve led us this far
And led your own entrepreneurs
Now there’s no need to drive
You have a willing chauffeur

No ‘ifs’ and ‘buts’ and ‘maybes’
If you don’t get the point by now
We’re not here to raise the roof
We’re here to tear the damned things down.
There's only one thing we can do to thwart the plot of these albino shape-shifting lizard BITCHES!
#2
I like it, there seems to be a lot of 'energy' while reading this. I especially like the lines:

Welcome to my town of misinformed creeps
Who sit back and sleep when the boats sinking deep


I think it starts it off real well. A good hook.

Now there’s no need to drive
You have a willing chauffeur


It was a good read.
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Noise:
Epiphone Les Paul Custom
Ibanez GIO
Fender Squier Acoustic

Amps and Effects:

Epiphone Valve Junior Head
Built-my-Own 1x12 cabinet w/ Fender 12" speaker
Boss DS-1

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#4
Okay, sorry.
There's only one thing we can do to thwart the plot of these albino shape-shifting lizard BITCHES!
#5
Maybe it’s not too bad to think everything’s alright
Maybe the biggest mistake is to think
If he’s able to think then he can fight


Favourite part, brilliant song.
Quote by TiMaRmStRoNg101
there was once this girl
in my school
and she was like
'greenday is so punk'

and i was all
omgelitist
'fawkofffffffffff'
and punched her in the face.
cause i can do that
cause I know more about punk rock and stuff