its a decently new song i wrote, titled "somewhere, nowhere" i did it in one take, lemme know what you guys think

link --> http://yarbird.dmusic.com/

its at the bottom of the list titled --> "somewhere, nowhere"
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I liked the jazzy bit at the beginning, and was kinda annoyed when the cheesy piano chords came in.

Your guitar tone is awful, very digital and harshly fuzzy. You also have way too much too gain.

The solo itself would sound nice if you sorted out your tone, but it is a little messy in parts. Also it get quite boring because there isn't much variation rhythmically. Also don't be afraid to let yourself go more mantal in your soloing.

The song get repetative as well because it doesn't change chord progression for 4 minutes. It needs more different parts or making shorter.

CFC? The prog rock one in my sig