#1
I wanted to write a song that was slow and calm and pleasant...

no vocals yet...and its only two and a half minutes long...

Crits and mindless praise welcome =]

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Last edited by Checker at Mar 26, 2007,
#3
Well, it is very calming, love it when the strings kick in, as well as the bridge is also simple, but great nontheless, all in all, it was pretty good, mabye a bit slow for me, but thats just me, keep it up
We're Composing our funeral songs, note by note

Let the carcass of the martyr burn
#4
Added a vocal track...tell me what you think...
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Last edited by Checker at Mar 25, 2007,
#8
sounded pretty good! i would consider it really soft rock or something... kind of sounds Snow Patrol-ish
#9
Made some small changes...I thought it would be the most logical way to bump the thread...

please crit