I wanted to write a song that was slow and calm and pleasant...

no vocals yet...and its only two and a half minutes long...

Crits and mindless praise welcome =]

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Last edited by Checker at Mar 26, 2007,
Well, it is very calming, love it when the strings kick in, as well as the bridge is also simple, but great nontheless, all in all, it was pretty good, mabye a bit slow for me, but thats just me, keep it up
We're Composing our funeral songs, note by note

Let the carcass of the martyr burn
Added a vocal track...tell me what you think...
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Last edited by Checker at Mar 25, 2007,
sounded pretty good! i would consider it really soft rock or something... kind of sounds Snow Patrol-ish
Made some small changes...I thought it would be the most logical way to bump the thread...

please crit