#2
i have to admit, i thought that video you posted a couple days ago was just kinda mediocre, but i really like this. you have some nice chord progressions throughout, my favorite was the one that comes in around 2:00 and again at 2:10. the ending is very good too, it seems to tie it up nicely. i think this song could use some more instrumentation, maybe some vocals. but, if you want to have it stand on its own thats fine too. i just think its a little long to be just acoustic guitar. nice work though, keep it up.
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#3
Quote by allstrats726
i have to admit, i thought that video you posted a couple days ago was just kinda mediocre, but i really like this. you have some nice chord progressions throughout, my favorite was the one that comes in around 2:00 and again at 2:10. the ending is very good too, it seems to tie it up nicely. i think this song could use some more instrumentation, maybe some vocals. but, if you want to have it stand on its own thats fine too. i just think its a little long to be just acoustic guitar. nice work though, keep it up.
mind checking out my stuff?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=547164


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#7
No negative comments, other then keep working on the creativity! Sounds very good, and if you added in some vocals or other instruments, it would just improve. I just bought a 12-string and recorded a track the night I bought it. Check it out? Click the link in my sig for Toxic Impeachment.
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#8
Sounds good. I'm not sure I think it stands alone as a one-guitar piece. You could try adding another guitar part, or some bass, or even some bongos or something. Or, of course, the dreaded vocals that no one seems to want to attempt. I don't care if you can't sing, just try dammit!

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#9
i use a version of cubase to record,working on a song with vocals jus need to time to write words and record.thanks for feed back
#10
Very nice clean guitar work, nice recording too! It's got direction y'know? It feels like it's going somewhere (I'm listening to it a i type) - it doesn't get lost either in some meandering bullshit - it comes back to a familiar theme but it's altogether more lively and built up at the end.

Nice composition, could also benefit from vocals - I think it's worth having a go

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