I love the quality, reminds of 60s, 70s stuff, kinda pop-ish. I like it, all except the vocals, I mean you can sing, but there are just some voices I like and some I dont. Something abour your voice I dont like, but thats all an opinion so dont take that too hard, like I said you can sing. But man the quality is professional. I like this, the melodies and everything, great stuff, good progression. nothing really wrong with it, its a short, fun, happy little ditty. I like it. good Job. That isnt really a crit, there is nothing really wrong with it. If you wanna crit mine heres the link.

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Wow I like this, it's definately got a 60's feel to it but I like that. Maybe a little VU in it, but poppy and real cool. The only thig I can say is I persnally would like to hear some fills and stuff in there. I was playing along and I think it would be a pretty easy song to put thse in. Please crit mine:https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=8689442#post8689442
Hehe, very Beatles-esque, as usual. Good recording quality and mixing. The voice could be a bit more powerful. I like the little changes in the drum patterns. The chord progression is cool.
About the vocals again: it seems to me that you hav difficulties to hold certain notes over a longer timespan. Overall, nice job and good recording. If you brush up the vox a bit you have a sure hit in the charts. Of the 60s/70s ;-)

Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=549700