lespaul2007
Registered User
Join date: Feb 2007
32 IQ
#1
Hey heres a song I've been working on for a while now, its unfinished but should be completed soon. I need some constructive critism and would love to hear your feedback.

Thanks, Jono
Attachments:
Fighting Fears.zip
rodrigomierh
havok 32
Join date: Jul 2005
949 IQ
#2
well its the same riff all over the song, even the distorted chords at the end have the same progression, only the leads change;so mess around with your progression to find some variations for chorus, bridge, solo etc. i really liked the main riff but I started to loose interest after hearing it for the 8th time.

work on a chorus, a solo and maybe add a bass line. I'm looking forward to hear the final work.

Mind critting my new song? its on my sig. thanks
gonzaw
UG's Secret Agent
Join date: Mar 2007
6,087 IQ
#3
I liked the solo a lot, it sounds very good, although it is a slow one, good job.....altough it gets repetitive at times.
The last riff sounded kind of boring, maybe you should increase the tempo, or add some more variation...
Also, maybe you could change the bassline, I don't know, it doesn't sound too.......eh.......interesting is the word.
The intro sounded nice too.
8/10

Crit Mine? (in sig)
lespaul2007
Registered User
Join date: Feb 2007
32 IQ
#4
Thanks alot, guys, That's what I'm working on straight away when I get the time, some riff variation (y), and I also have a second solo written u. I'll hit you with the update soon. Critting songs now