devilscruffs14
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Join date: Jul 2006
370 IQ
#2
did you used to be a guitarist?

cuz that's what it seems like. becaus they notes are really high, and overall, it doesn't seem very "Bassy" if you know what i mean.
lonejedio5
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Join date: Apr 2007
101 IQ
#3
Quote by devilscruffs14
did you used to be a guitarist?

cuz that's what it seems like. becaus they notes are really high, and overall, it doesn't seem very "Bassy" if you know what i mean.


Haha yeah I know what you mean, alot of my band mates tell me the same thing all the time, I really get frustrated because they tell me the bass parts are 'too complicated' and they sound more like guitar parts.
But no I've never played guitar, I've never really liked it that much, maybe some day I'll get an acoustic, but I just write music that I like on my bass, not just funky bass lines, I like melodic stuff..
leo_p8
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Join date: Jun 2003
175 IQ
#7
Quote by Deliriumbassist
Try to stick to notes in the same key. The A# in bars 11 and 12 sound very out of place, for example. Also, the last 3 bars don't really do anything for me.


My thoughts, exactly.
zakatak9389
Deviate from the form
Join date: Mar 2007
4,100 IQ
#8
Thanks for the crit on mine man

As for your song I liked it. I didn't sound too bassy like they said, but it still sounds pretty good. The only problem I have is in bars 10, 11, and 12. there were some notes that were way off key. Fix that and it'd sound much better.
Crit mine? (my new one's autumn tears, thanks for checkin all my other stuff, I appreciate it bro. )
lonejedio5
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Join date: Apr 2007
101 IQ
#9
Ok I've worked on it a little more.
BTW, seeing as it is only bass,
could anyone by any chance add guitars or any instrument that they feel would add to the overall song?
If anyone feels like it, I'd love to know what you guys would do with the song.......Thx.
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