Chaperoni
Registered User
Join date: Dec 2006
840 IQ
#1
It's short, and weird, but I like it. I dunno.
It has an acoustic guitar, bass and then drums.

I wrote it in one session, which is weird for me.
I wanted a song that I had written, liked, and could play.
(I'm not that good at guitar, only been "playing" a few months.)
EDIT: It'd probably be better if I attatched the files...
Attachments:
anotheracoustic.zip
anotheracousticv2.zip
I like waffles

Please crit my EP!
Last edited by Chaperoni at May 6, 2007,
rodrigomierh
havok 32
Join date: Jul 2005
949 IQ
#2
sounds like tantric. anyway, i like even thought it is pretty simple, the only thing i didnt like was the verse riff, everything else is fine, oh and mabe another solo would be cool too. good job.

mind critting my new song? its on my sig thanks.
Chaperoni
Registered User
Join date: Dec 2006
840 IQ
#3
Updated with some backing from an electric, with a spontaneous 4 bar solo thrown in for good (bad?) measure.
I like waffles

Please crit my EP!
gonzaw
UG's Secret Agent
Join date: Mar 2007
6,087 IQ
#4
The riffs were good (the verse riff was a little boring, you should shorten it up, or add vocals), and some parts of the bass were good too. The first solo was good, and the random one, well, the first two bars sounded very good, but then it went crazy .
It was good, crit mine? (in my sig)