Logan21
UG #1 Beer Drinker
Join date: Dec 2006
299 IQ
#2
I'm not a punk fan, if thats what it is, but it sounds really good, sounds like Gob
Captian Xero
The one, the only.
Join date: Apr 2006
343 IQ
#4
Thougts:

Make the Clean Guitar a Jazz Guitar...
In the verse I would have made each note have 2 bars...
Repeat 81-82 and make it play twice before going back into the verse. Then on the first time, make 82 two half notes, One being D the other B..

Other than that... it's pretty perfect... C4C?