Cyberbob
Floating In Space
Join date: Oct 2004
322 IQ
#1
Hey, here's a little bluesrock song I've been working on for a while, give and a listen and tell me what you think. I'm planning on adding a vocal line for a lot of the song, which would fill up the verses a bit more, and also planning on changing that woeful outro solo.
I'm a bit concerned that I've accidentally stolen the main riff, cause it sounds so familiar to me. Hopefully this is just my imagination.
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Song.zip
gonzaw
UG's Secret Agent
Join date: Mar 2007
6,087 IQ
#2
I liked the intro riff very much, and I don't know if its a rip off or not, as I don't recall any song similar to this one. I loved the harmony, and very good work with the bass (specially in the Interlude and verses)
The drums were great also, and the bridge sounded cool too. The solo 1 and 2 were f***ingly awesome.
I don't have any complaints...every part was perfect, and the outro solo is not as crap as you think it is, I quite like it.
If you did this by yourself, then you are (or should be) a professional composer........10/10

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rodrigomierh
havok 32
Join date: Jul 2005
949 IQ
#4
wow, i loved it, really happy n catchy song, i liked the solos too, the main riff is awesome but gets kind of repetitive, by the end, cause its a pretty long song.i would really like to hear this with vocals, ill give you a 9 /10. excellent job.

mind critting my new song? its on my sig thanks.
MadMudgeN
Lets do this I'm a cashew
Join date: Sep 2003
1,716 IQ
#5
Hey thanks for the crit on mine before we start.

This isn't really my type of music, but it's pretty good. The intro riff gets a little tired, but that's just me. Also, The verse is pretty generic, but it's got some sweet fills, so I dunno if you should change it or not. All the solos were sweet. They blended very nicely with the overall tone of the rest of the song.

Pretty good all in all though. 9.5/10
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Avalanche1
Registered User
Join date: Nov 2005
176 IQ
#6
Some nice riffs in there. Not really my style of music but I still enjoyed it. Seemed very happy and up beat. Good job. I also liked the bass alot.
sebastian_96
Spared no expense
Join date: May 2006
1,209 IQ
#7
That was quite excellent

reminded me of Better by Screaming Jets...pretty awesome stuff.

The main riff got a tad repetative...but still great non-the-less

The only fault was probably....well I can't think of any other than the repetative riff

9/10

great work

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Str4ng3r
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Join date: Sep 2005
290 IQ
#8
Great song! Really catchy! The only flaw is the repetative riff... ;D

9/10

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pa182
Registered User
Join date: Mar 2004
814 IQ
#9
good song but it reminds me alot of i feel fine by the beatles