Str4ng3r
Registered User
Join date: Sep 2005
290 IQ
#1
I've just come up with an beginning to a song, but I need to know what you guys think. If i shall continue working on it, or just dump it

If you crit it, Ill crit your songs back ofc...

EDIT: Updated version with GP4 is lower down the thread...
Attachments:
Song.zip
Last edited by Str4ng3r at May 8, 2007,
Chaperoni
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Join date: Dec 2006
840 IQ
#2
Can you export to GP4 and repost? I don't have GP5.1 or whatever the new one is and can't open it,
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Please crit my EP!
Vinnie5
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Join date: Jul 2007
1,088 IQ
#4
Pretty good! not much to say besides to tell you to go out and record yourself playin it for realzies.

Thanks for the crit!!
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Quicksand15
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Join date: Feb 2007
610 IQ
#5
ok, you got a nice start here, the acoustic riff is really interesting!
but i think it's still in its infancy, you definately can make much more out of it!
the drums seemed pretty standard (and not that fitting) and the bass could do much more than just the root, too. the strings would be better if you'd put them in much later, at the beginning it's a little bit too much...

overall: keep on writing new parts and elaborating the parts you already have! but you do have a good start!

if you want to crit one of my songs: 'Vacante' would be nice!