gonzaw
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Join date: Mar 2007
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#1
Hi
I've been working on this acoustic piece today, and though it was okay, its not finished yet, I only did it til the solo.
I don't think the violin is in key, as I don't know a thing about violin , but I'll take my chances...
Anyway, I would like some comments on this, C4C of course...
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Accium.zip
ch715dallat
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Join date: Jun 2006
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#2
nice an enjoyable riff although the violin sounds out of key on the first bar of the main riff everytime, its when its over that c major chord it sounds very off maybe fix that bit up? other than that its a nice song
Last edited by ch715dallat at May 10, 2007,
gallagher2006
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Join date: Mar 2006
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#5
Was pretty good...cept for the off key Violin Also some of the solo was off key
gonzaw
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Join date: Mar 2007
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#6
Thanks for the crit!

Now I have an updated version, and it has an ending, but I don't know what you guys think, I don't know if to make it longer or leave it as it is...
(I tried to fix the violin and solo, but there may be some off-keys in the distortion part, but I'll have to check it out later cause now I'm going out... )
Attachments:
Accium.zip
ch715dallat
BTBAM=Godly
Join date: Jun 2006
3,466 IQ
#7
nice but theres still some out of key notes in there just check the chord and check the scale again for each bar and make sure you get them matched up right but its a good song, the last bar on each verse reminds me of some western film themetune, i dunno what tho lol
gallagher2006
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#8
Quote by gonzaw
Thanks for the crit!

Now I have an updated version, and it has an ending, but I don't know what you guys think, I don't know if to make it longer or leave it as it is...
(I tried to fix the violin and solo, but there may be some off-keys in the distortion part, but I'll have to check it out later cause now I'm going out... )


Still some off keys...take the 14s out of the solo and replace hem with 12s, and replace the hammered on 12s with 10s etc. Also, on the verse before the verse, there is something off on the viola