WaYnO94
Registered User
Join date: Jan 2007
145 IQ
#3
its ok but its a bit repetitive.bar 22 - 25 needs some work but when it gets into bar 18 - 22 thats heaps good.
wayno
The Powerslave
UG Senior Member
Join date: Jan 2005
307 IQ
#4
It certainly works alright, but it sounds to me like its the intro to a song with everything in it, rather than a whole song with 2 basses in it. I felt you didnt really use the basses enough, and most the song could be done almost the same with just one bassist and a guitarist. Like I said earlier its good, but not as a song in itself, more as an intro to something else.

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