UG's Secret Agent
Join date: Mar 2007
6,087 IQ
Helllo again..
I made this song like a month ago, so I decided to give it a shot and try to finish it. But as you can see, its not finished yet.
I didn't have too much time to correct some off key notes in the solo and such, so maybe later I will post an updated version (considering what you say of course).

Anyway, its kind of funky, and kind of not funky, anyway......

havok 32
Join date: Jul 2005
949 IQ
well i really like the funky sound of it, but i think the chords on the main riff sound out of tune, they do fit the song but i think that moving the chord progression to a higher or lower position would help, you just have to find the sweet spot haha. i didn't like that u used the same riff for the solo over and over again but with slightly changes at the end, everything else is fine IMO. good job!

PS. thanks for critting my other song