USCENDONE BENE
I want pure energy
Join date: Jun 2006
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#1
Previously posted as 'Uncompromisable Time', but i deleted the thread when i realised i had uploaded a much older, incomplete version.

anyway, id appreciate if you could look at the solo for the song and fiddle around with it, or change it all together. IMO it really sucks and needs changing but im out of inspiration, and im not a great solo writer anyway. I used the Scale Arabic in D to make it a bit more interesting, but it doesnt work

C4C as always, if you feel like just rating this as it is, coz thats fine

thanks
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Last edited by USCENDONE BENE at May 13, 2007,
vIsIbleNoIsE
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#2
the opening is great. but i think you should put more variation throughout, maybe add more melody over it - leadwork doesn't just belong in the solo!
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USCENDONE BENE
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#4
Quote by Nirvana-Man
The drums sound kind of cheesy....

probably because i have never played drums in my life
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#5
Quote by vIsIbleNoIsE
the opening is great. but i think you should put more variation throughout, maybe add more melody over it - leadwork doesn't just belong in the solo!

i was just thinking about putting some more leads in...
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#7
Quote by fragydig529
I only changed the solo and the verse after it.

thats fine, much appreciated
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kylendm
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#9
Damn uber i liked that a lot even though not the creator. in my opinion that was the best solo for it yet.
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#11
thanks very much to ubernooblet06 and fragydig529, i will use your ideas to make my own
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#12
it sounds like a song for a video game, but y use that scale?