havok 32
Join date: Jul 2005
949 IQ
that's almost like "One" by Metallica part II, anyway, i liked the sea sound at the intro, and the lead fits perfectly into the progression.I didn't find anything wrong at all, unless the length, you should make a full song out of this! good job.

mind critting one of mines? they are on my sig. thanks.
The Powerslave
UG Senior Member
Join date: Jan 2005
307 IQ
First off I'd increase the bass volume, as for songs like this strong bass is important (to me anyway). The intro riff was very nice, and at first the solo seemed quite abrupt, but after a bar or two it really settled down and is a very nice solo, works well, which I cant say for many solos over acoustic bits like that. And as the above person said make it into a full song, its really got some potential.

Crit mine?
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