Jonjy2
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Join date: Jun 2006
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#1
Hey this is something I've been working on for a lil while...

I actually took one of the riffs of this from my other "Bodom Inspired song" (In sig) and put it on this, I think its better here...

Its not finished, still need more riffs and stuff...but w.e just looking for wat people think of it

Plz check it out and crit
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Bodom Inspired 2.zip
CaRveItiNbass
doesn't even play bass
Join date: Oct 2005
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#2
dude thats pretty awesome. bodom is my favorite band of all time, and that reminds me alot of them.
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CaRveItiNbass
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Join date: Oct 2005
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#3
if you get a friend request from WARHEART, thatd be me. when i get my recording done, ill send you a request from my side project myspace.
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ZeM00finMan
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Join date: Feb 2007
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#4
I actually found it a very interesting song. I honestly wasn't expecting much when I clicked the link, but, it actually tickled my fancy. Only thing I could say would be... Like, bar 42, what's used there.. for some reason, it doesn't sit right with my ear, why? I honestly couldn't tell you.. But, eh... Overall, very nicely done. How long did you spend writing this?
Jonjy2
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Join date: Jun 2006
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#5
Quote by ZeM00finMan
I actually found it a very interesting song. I honestly wasn't expecting much when I clicked the link, but, it actually tickled my fancy. Only thing I could say would be... Like, bar 42, what's used there.. for some reason, it doesn't sit right with my ear, why? I honestly couldn't tell you.. But, eh... Overall, very nicely done. How long did you spend writing this?


ya for bar 42 i did kinda a variation of the normal power chord...I love switching up different chords and using them as "Interlude licks" or whatever its called lol

I spent an hour or 2 on it 2 weeks ago, went on vacation, came back, spent another hour redoing a lil here and there, and sent it in here...

Oh and I'll go check my myspace request WARHEART ^^ Thanks
RPotts
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Join date: Jan 2006
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#8
Where in bar 42 is an inversion of a powerchord or whatever??

I think the verse and the interlude sounds similar to the verse and interlude in Are You Dead Yet?, which you may find good or bad. But I think the intro sounds pretty happy, doesn't really fit the song.

EDIT: I'm really not down with the polka beat that's used in the intro and chorus.
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Jonjy2
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Join date: Jun 2006
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#9
Quote by RPotts
Where in bar 42 is an inversion of a powerchord or whatever??


Oh it was the second part of the bar before it, i made a mistake :-\

Quote by RPotts

EDIT: I'm really not down with the polka beat that's used in the intro and chorus.


Chorus? There wasnt a chorus
Bloodsick
just pullin yer tit mate
Join date: Nov 2005
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#11
I thought it sounded a lot like new bodom, especially the melodic bit at the end. I agree with others try and finish it, I think some thrashy riffs would sound good with it too. Perhaps add some gallops in the riffs you already have to spice it up a bit?
deathmetallover
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Join date: May 2007
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#12
That was kickass, the intro riff was great especially the change into the verse riff, it fit perfectly, the interlude riff was very bodom. Sounds great not much else to say really.
Very bodom
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Join date: Feb 2007
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#13
Quote by RPotts
I think the verse and the interlude sounds similar to the verse and interlude in Are You Dead Yet?, which you may find good or bad.
It looks to me like a mix of the AYDY riff aswell as the pre-chorus melodic riff in Follow The Reaper

Don't you think??
(talking about bars 41+)


I like it much!
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SIMotorcycles
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Join date: Jun 2007
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#16
Definitely Bodom inspired - I'm liking most of it, except the choir aahs, I think it might be better if those were rephrased or even completely removed. I think there's a bit too much melody into it as well, which can give listener fatigue, so try some more rhythm focused parts.

Just my opinion, though.
hzac
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Join date: Jun 2007
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#17
To me this song was jsut a happy verse of bodom songs mushed into one.

The first riff was to upbeat for my liking but bar 13+ drums were awesome. i liked :P

The interlude was nice work but to be honest i think the whole song was jsut a cheap bodom rip off.

Thats jsut my opinion. Your try steer away from wiriting things so similar for a while that way you can truly find what you good at when playing guitar.

Or may im jsut speaking crap :P

Can you crit mine? be as harsh as you think you need to be.
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