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I want pure energy
Join date: Jun 2006
1,743 IQ
#1
i've most probably posted an incomplete version of this a long time ago, but this now is the real deal. It's as complete as i can make it, solo and everything. Im not really a lead player, so theres only one solo . So tell me what you think, id be happy to return the favor on one of your compositions, just give me a link at the bottom of your crit or something

thanks
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Trench Warfare.zip
"If you want beef, then bring the ruckus." - Marilyn Monroe
ctb
Join date: Apr 2004
1,449 IQ
#2
That was really cool. Kept it simple and the rhythm kept a cool beat.
USCENDONE BENE
I want pure energy
Join date: Jun 2006
1,743 IQ
#3
jesus christ! Getting crit on here is like oral sex. You aint gonna get any unless you've given it to them first! *throws a wild tatrum*
"If you want beef, then bring the ruckus." - Marilyn Monroe
USCENDONE BENE
I want pure energy
Join date: Jun 2006
1,743 IQ
#5
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"If you want beef, then bring the ruckus." - Marilyn Monroe
ShadowintheSun
UG's Thrash Metal Fanatic
Join date: Nov 2006
335 IQ
#6
That was good, i heard a lot of Metallica influence in that (it might be just me though). the music is good, the solo is fine. I'm the same, i don't do lead but its a damn good effort. I can give this a 8.5/10 because Thrash is my favourite type of music, but the one problem with it was the high number of crashes made on the drums, thats whats stopping it from being a 9

Crit whichever one you want (preferably Enter the Shadows because its my best one)
masterskill
Lion on the floor!
Join date: Feb 2006
191 IQ
#7
Thats was pretty good. I'm not a thrash kinda guy and I enjoyed the whole thing. Riff 2 and all its variants are awesome (riff 3, Verse 1). I really don't like Riff 4/chorus riff though. It just seems pretty... plain. The interlude is cool, but the first few notes of the riff sound offbeat/laggy. The tempo change is neat, but needs something else, not sure what. I'm not much of a solo, so that really didn't stand out to me (except near the end, which was great). I think the section between the solo and the verse needs work. The Outro is a bit lacking.

Overall, really fun to listen to. Great rocker.

C4C plz :p
Thefallofman
Lesh Is More
Join date: Aug 2006
1,573 IQ
#8
The riffs were pretty good, and the solo was fine... but it just repeated way too much and got kind of bland and boring over time.
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