bradbradbrad
I pity the fool.
Join date: Mar 2005
526 IQ
#1
Hey everyone.

I wrote this last week.. have mixed feelings about it, thought I'd see what some other people think of it.
The odd time sig bit and solo are the bits I'm unsure about.

But yeah, go for it!
Leave a link and I'll crit your stuff.

Thanks,
Brad.
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Klayy
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Join date: Jun 2003
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#2
real.$$$$ig.cool

actually I found a lot of good ideas there, but it doesn't change too much, so it can get boring
but it's a great starting point there
_-Skeletor-_
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Join date: Oct 2006
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#3
I reckon its pretty kick ass love that main riff with the harmonic bend thingy...strange sounding solo, cool none the less. Maybe just a tad bit repedative 8.5/10.
bradbradbrad
I pity the fool.
Join date: Mar 2005
526 IQ
#4
Thanks for the quick responses guys, exactly what I was thinking about the repetitiveness, I'll work on that.
ESP H-300 (EMG81/85)
Ibanez RG570
Ashton VP30
Dunlop Crybaby
Boss CE-5
Boss DS-2
Behringer EQ-700
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ch715dallat
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Join date: Jun 2006
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#5
yeah the main riff with the ph bend was cool but yeah all the start riffs were just slight alterations on the first riff you need alot more variation for an instrumental loved the solo tho, im currently doing an instrumental too its in my sig check it out