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Join date: Jan 2004
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i think it's pretty catchy.

the lyrics are here.

I just want to sleep forever.

Last edited by Grovermans at May 26, 2007,
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Join date: Jan 2004
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but i'm lazy

i edited it into the first post.

I just want to sleep forever.

Join date: Jun 2006
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i cant say ive heard anything like that ouside of RPG's lol, it was good interesting throughout.

The main riff sounded very muse like in places but not at all in others lol i really dont know what else to say lol
Join date: Apr 2004
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That was interesting lol. I liked it so i'm gonna give it 9/10.
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Join date: Jan 2004
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ahahha i don't see AT ALL how it
would go with an anime or an RPG.
i made it as a kind of pop-rock song!
and i didn't think it was weird at all.

maybe that means i'm just weird?

I just want to sleep forever.

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Join date: Aug 2006
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Eh. I can't say I really liked this. Everything was a tad boring except for the chorus. I did enjoy that. And the last chorus was pure genius. Other than that, it didn't stand out that much to me.

7/10 for those amazing choruses.
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Join date: Apr 2007
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Haha, this is such a cool song. Deff. something I would hear ummm....not exactly sure where. Maybe somewhere in Final Fantasy. Haha I wish I knew how to write something like this. It's deff. catchy, probly one of those songs that will get stuck in your head for a very very very long time. Haha, cool stuff man.

Anyway you could crit. mine? The first on my signature?
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Join date: Apr 2006
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It is very catchy. I like the F->C#7 progression, very cool. The song in total sounds very surreal. Very nice ending, bringing back the first theme. I also like the simplistic lead part at 46 a lottt. Overall I'd give it 7.5/10.
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Join date: May 2007
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very creative and very catchy.
overall i like it but it could use some more prominent variations in the different verse parts.
also, it should go well with those lyrics
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Join date: Jun 2004
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A well constructed song, but I didn't like the song itself. Not my style.
The rhythms/chords/progressions seemed rather bland.
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