Sharkuzzi
!!Lemmy!!
Join date: Jan 2007
293 IQ
#2
Hey man, it sounds really nice! The intro is really good, i enjoyed it. But to make it sound even better, after bar 12, you should add fast drums and the 2nd guitar playing something like this:

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|-5--------------------------------------|
|-5---5-5-5---5-5-5---5-5-5---5-5-|
|-3---3-3-3---3-3-3---3-3-3---3-3-|
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Of course with changin the chords.
Chek it, imo it would sound better.
Okay, bar 26 seems to be okay, but try change those high notes to normal power chords. I like the delay that enters later. Sound great. But change one note in the bar 29 from 16 to 15. Those pianos playing later are ok. The only thing that i didn't like, was the outro. Seems to be too long.

Overall, nice. You setted the RSE very good.

Crit mine? Trash+hard rock in sig