Demons&Wizards
ΔxΔp=ħ/2
Join date: May 2006
511 IQ
#1
Okay so here is my very first song, it started out as a sweeping lesson i was designing, that kinda turn into a short (1.30mins) metal piece.
I realise the sweeps have nothing to do with the song, and that it needs beefing up a little to make it longer, but hey, i was bored (i should have been revising for my physics exam)!
enjoy.
Attachments:
The Sweepening.zip
ibanezguitars44
Tab Contributor
Join date: Jul 2004
2,916 IQ
#2
that sounds really cool. id love to hear the actual song
Originally posted by primusfan
When you crank up the gain to 10 and switch to the lead channel, it actually sounds like you are unjustifiably bombing an innocent foreign land.


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ch715dallat
BTBAM=Godly
Join date: Jun 2006
3,466 IQ
#3
That was great on thing i would change so far is on the intro IMO it sounds better if you go bar 1 bar 2 bar 1 bar 5 and leave out bar 4 it sounds much better, just a suggestion. the rest was flawless i loved both solos although the rhythm of the song is fair boring by itself it can hold out a few bars between leads without getting uninteresting. very nice piece you should really get to work on lengthening it and making some really big solos in it.

If you dont mind could you have a look at the one at the top of my sig?



Edit: attached file with what i mean for the intro
Attachments:
The Sweepening.zip
Last edited by ch715dallat at May 29, 2007,
Demons&Wizards
ΔxΔp=ħ/2
Join date: May 2006
511 IQ
#4
Quote by ch715dallat
That was great on thing i would change so far is on the intro IMO it sounds better if you go bar 1 bar 2 bar 1 bar 5 and leave out bar 4 it sounds much better, just a suggestion. the rest was flawless i loved both solos although the rhythm of the song is fair boring by itself it can hold out a few bars between leads without getting uninteresting. very nice piece you should really get to work on lengthening it and making some really big solos in it.

If you dont mind could you have a look at the one at the top of my sig?



Edit: attached file with what i mean for the intro


do u have it in midi or gp4?