jakemac
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Join date: Jan 2006
1,733 IQ
#1
The chorus is kind of country style the intro is metalcore style as is the verse. It isn't finished but I just wanted to know if it was good instead of carrying on with a boring one. Thanks.
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hardcoretillidie
Join date: Apr 2007
154 IQ
#2
Sorry dude, but I didn't like that... the country bit just sounded like a bunch of flies in a jar, and the metalcore riffs were ok but borin. Sorry...
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jakemac
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Join date: Jan 2006
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#3
Oh its ok it's all part of the game... no hard feelings..k ??
bakshandloomis
Ug's Metalcore fanboy
Join date: Sep 2006
519 IQ
#4
i liked the verse, but not so much the chorus, and the solo could use some work, maybe not sweeping the WHOLE time?
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Thefallofman
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Join date: Aug 2006
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#5
Needs more drums, less tempo changes and more transitions I think. It just kind of seemed like random riffs thrown together. It's not unified like a song at all.
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