Grovermans
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Join date: Jan 2004
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#1
i think it's pretty good.

i'm going to try to write lyrics for it soon.
Attachments:
pan.zip

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Grovermans
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Join date: Jan 2004
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#4
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Uggh, this post brings frowns upon my face.
i knowwww it upsets me too

but thanks guys.

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Nunwhxre 666
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Join date: Aug 2006
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#5
I. Absolutely. LOVE. This peice. You have really outdone yourself on this. I have already listened to this song about 4 or 5 times. It never gets old. It's pure genius.

10/10. AMAZING work done here.
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gravewatching
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Join date: Jun 2006
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#6
nice with a lil inspiration of pans labyrinth that movie is amazin bro
gonzaw
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Join date: Mar 2007
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#7
The intro piano was great.....
I also liked the guitar part......a contrast from the last part....
Those slides are great too....
And there is a pacman sound or harp in there that adds nice harmony too...
At 40 or something over there there are nice riffs....well, in fact...the whole song is full of good riffs......
I only wish you used the piano a bit more.....

Anyway.....great song 9/10

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Grovermans
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#8
well there are two guitars and a keyboard.
i can't really put a piano part along with
the synth parts, cause they'd both be
played on the keyboard, and they'd both
have to be played at the same time.

i mean. my keyboardist is talented,
but he's not jesus

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Grovermans
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Join date: Jan 2004
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#10
nah.

i don't actually have a band;
just a keyboardist. haha.

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HumanitysDeath
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Join date: Jun 2004
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#12
I dunno.
The keyboard seems a little over dominant.
I like it in some parts, but it doesn't fit with the usual Grover style I'm used to.

Overall, I'd say it's pretty good.
Just not my favorite.
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Grovermans
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Join date: Jan 2004
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#14
Quote by HumanitysDeath
I dunno.
The keyboard seems a little over dominant.
I like it in some parts, but it doesn't fit with the usual Grover style I'm used to.

Overall, I'd say it's pretty good.
Just not my favorite.
in the chorus?

yeah i was kind of worried about that,
but i really wanted the keyboard melody
to be heard clearly over the two guitars.

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Thefallofman
Lesh Is More
Join date: Aug 2006
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#15
Everything's already been said, so I won't get redundant. Nice job... but are you trying to spell "Ophelia"?? If so, you might want to fix that. Spelling errors don't really draw people in to want to hear songs. Keep up the good work.
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Grovermans
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Join date: Jan 2004
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#16
1) it can be spelled either way.
2) in this case, it is spelled this way.

but thanks.

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Drewski2113
Registered User
Join date: Jul 2006
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#17
it sounds like the mars volta to me, which ties in with the whole pans thing because of the spanish.

i like it alot.

drew
Stephen00000
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Join date: Jul 2005
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#18
I really liked this like i like most of all ur other stuff. It seems full of depth and harmony - very rich music if u understand what i mean. Has good flowing riffs together then a rampant chorus. I just wish some of your songs could have guitar solos cos they would sound so good with the progressions you come up with.
Well done!

PS - i got a song up "Powertab Funk song" at the moment- comments appreciated.