kylendm
Baronboi
Join date: Aug 2006
8,281 IQ
#1
Yea i was bored so i made this little beginning to a song. Tell me what you think

Use GP5 sounds better imo
Attachments:
Begginning.zip
Guitars:
Ibanez UV777P
Ibanez RGD2127FX
Ibanez RG3120TW
Ibanez RGD7421
Ibanez SA160
Amps:
Baron Custom Amps K88
Randall RM100
Madison Divinity II
Cabs:
Mesa 4x12
Bogner 4x12
H&K 4x12
Last edited by kylendm at Jun 19, 2007,
kylendm
Baronboi
Join date: Aug 2006
8,281 IQ
#3
Thanks :P
Guitars:
Ibanez UV777P
Ibanez RGD2127FX
Ibanez RG3120TW
Ibanez RGD7421
Ibanez SA160
Amps:
Baron Custom Amps K88
Randall RM100
Madison Divinity II
Cabs:
Mesa 4x12
Bogner 4x12
H&K 4x12
Sharkuzzi
!!Lemmy!!
Join date: Jan 2007
293 IQ
#4
Hey, nice! I think there's nothing wrong with it, and I enjoyed it, really! If you wan't, you can change only the last chord in bar 4, 8, etc. from 0's to 5's, it sounds better IMO. Good work on the drums.
Keep up the good work, I'm waiting for the whole song.
Crit mine? In sig.
kylendm
Baronboi
Join date: Aug 2006
8,281 IQ
#5
yea it sounds ok but i think its fine how it is thanks anyway :-)
Guitars:
Ibanez UV777P
Ibanez RGD2127FX
Ibanez RG3120TW
Ibanez RGD7421
Ibanez SA160
Amps:
Baron Custom Amps K88
Randall RM100
Madison Divinity II
Cabs:
Mesa 4x12
Bogner 4x12
H&K 4x12
kylendm
Baronboi
Join date: Aug 2006
8,281 IQ
#6
well i worked on it more i added a solo part but i need to work out the end it needs that kind of umph that ends a solo good but well heres that part.
Attachments:
Begin.zip
Guitars:
Ibanez UV777P
Ibanez RGD2127FX
Ibanez RG3120TW
Ibanez RGD7421
Ibanez SA160
Amps:
Baron Custom Amps K88
Randall RM100
Madison Divinity II
Cabs:
Mesa 4x12
Bogner 4x12
H&K 4x12
ElBarto2811
Just me
Join date: Dec 2006
197 IQ
#7
Just perfect, I'd like to give you some advice of how to improve the song, but I can think of nothing. Really nice.
kylendm
Baronboi
Join date: Aug 2006
8,281 IQ
#8
thanks mate

Haha guys i'm just in a metal mood today heres a better solo and harmony now.

Also GP4 and MIDI
Attachments:
Begin.zip
Guitars:
Ibanez UV777P
Ibanez RGD2127FX
Ibanez RG3120TW
Ibanez RGD7421
Ibanez SA160
Amps:
Baron Custom Amps K88
Randall RM100
Madison Divinity II
Cabs:
Mesa 4x12
Bogner 4x12
H&K 4x12
Last edited by kylendm at Jun 19, 2007,
kylendm
Baronboi
Join date: Aug 2006
8,281 IQ
#9
bump
Guitars:
Ibanez UV777P
Ibanez RGD2127FX
Ibanez RG3120TW
Ibanez RGD7421
Ibanez SA160
Amps:
Baron Custom Amps K88
Randall RM100
Madison Divinity II
Cabs:
Mesa 4x12
Bogner 4x12
H&K 4x12
khamett
Khamett
Join date: Jun 2007
164 IQ
#10
the intro solo thing is f...ng awesome, but i dont knoe why the others did not make it too great, but still it is pretty good song, especially the first solo! 7.5-7.7/10! good work
khamett
Khamett
Join date: Jun 2007
164 IQ
#11
**** thefirst solo is great! i listen to it 10 or 12 times now!
kylendm
Baronboi
Join date: Aug 2006
8,281 IQ
#12
Well i made some adjustments hope its somewhat better.
Attachments:
Begin1.zip
Guitars:
Ibanez UV777P
Ibanez RGD2127FX
Ibanez RG3120TW
Ibanez RGD7421
Ibanez SA160
Amps:
Baron Custom Amps K88
Randall RM100
Madison Divinity II
Cabs:
Mesa 4x12
Bogner 4x12
H&K 4x12
hzac
What is music?
Join date: Jun 2007
133 IQ
#14
Im a huge shadows falls fan and i think this song is right up thier / my alley. It has some good hard riffs that sound cool without being to technical.. and i like that. lets you jump around on stage and still play it correctly :P The intro solo/lead really fit in well with you rhythm. I think your going to have quite a song on your hands.

Please crit mine. it would be much appreciated.
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=614140
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kylendm
Baronboi
Join date: Aug 2006
8,281 IQ
#16
Sure thing
Guitars:
Ibanez UV777P
Ibanez RGD2127FX
Ibanez RG3120TW
Ibanez RGD7421
Ibanez SA160
Amps:
Baron Custom Amps K88
Randall RM100
Madison Divinity II
Cabs:
Mesa 4x12
Bogner 4x12
H&K 4x12
eddiehimself
Call me EH, eh?
Join date: Jun 2006
1,541 IQ
#17
this is a really mint song. I'm actually gonna keep that. You might want it recorded with real instruments if you know what i mean
EH


"Show me war; show me pestilence; show me the blood-red hands of retribution..."
vinguler
Registered User
Join date: Apr 2007
316 IQ
#18
pretty good stuff you have here.
i liked it, catchy and kinda heavy.
the solos are good, but not really my taste.
the rythem is very good, and they change perfectly.
i cant really say more about the song, since this part is kinda finished.

i hope to see this continue.
8/10.

btw, if you have time, plz check out my songs in the sig
(i prefer the last ones).
crit my songs, (PLZ):
[thread="610914"]Num.2[/thread]
[thread="610914"]Num.3[/thread]
[thread="610914"]Num.4[/thread]
[thread="620776"]Num.9[/thread]
[thread="620776"]Num.10[/thread]
[thread="630441"]Num.11[/thread]
[thread="637838"]Num.12[/thread]
[thread="638436"]Num.13[/thread]
[thread="639309"]Num.14(UnFinshed)[/thread]
[thread="638439"]Num.15(UnFinshed)[/thread]
[thread="642193"]Num.17[/thread]
[thread="643556"]Num.18[/thread]
[thread="651276"]Num.19[/thread]
[thread="660867"]Out Of The Darkness[/thread]
[thread="661588"]Begining[/thread]
British_Steal
UG Member
Join date: Aug 2007
1,623 IQ
#19
yayy! something different kinda

the intro is cool but you kinda ruin it with the melody

and you need to expand on that theme more like make it different but still the same if you know what i mean

personally i think you had the right idea with the intro, some catchy metal that's still heavy. that's the direction you started in and should keep going in no more melodic metal
because i just can't handle the same thing over and over
once thing, make the intro more interesting rhythmically and head with that style of metal, groove metal i think it's called

anyway good luck

Crit mine?
Last edited by British_Steal at Aug 30, 2007,