Join date: Apr 2006
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Haven't submitted another song for so long, never got around to doing it.

This is well...doesn't sound that good in GP5. I would have tuned the bass an octave lower too, but it wouldn't register the lowest lowest note, so.. it's in original drop C.
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It's less..dissonant..but yea, here it is.

Necrophiliac Dogs
Join date: Jan 2007
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Could you possibly post a non-GP tab? I like the sound of it on MIDI, but don't have guitar pro. Sounds good.
Silver Satellite Eyes
Join date: Feb 2007
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Okay, while I like it, I really think this tuning is complete bollocks, it sounds so much better in just plain old drop C. Besides do you know a guitar that could naturally play this drop drop C of yours lol.

Okay okay octave pedle but thats not the point heh

So yeah my only complaint was your stupid ass tunings, other than that I'm really digging your death riffage man.

Keep it up!
Join date: Apr 2006
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Thanks for your comments.
Ok, regarding the tuning.

I used to use .015s, and they CAN handle drop drop E, although they feel like .009s in Drop A, but that's beside the point.
I do agree that pushing it to drop drop c might be a bit insane, unless I use like .017s.

So yea, octave pedal is intended.
Thank god the bass was unable to tune an octave lower, or my subwoofers would explode
Silver Satellite Eyes
Join date: Feb 2007
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hehe sure thing man.
Tuning too low scares me some times haha.

If I ever post something up I'll let you know, I'd love to get some comments back from you

The bass is a low enough instrument as it is without dropping down that far I should think your subwoofers are pleased
Join date: Apr 2006
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Yes, listening to it just makes me wonder, it's gotta be like playing rubber bands

I really wanted to drop the bass an octave lower, but the lowest notes just can't be heard..
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Join date: Jun 2003
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I don't like it, sorry... it's just too common, ordinary and plain for my personal tastes.

Add diversity to the riffing, add some time-signature changes, hell, have the drums do something other than blast beats. I don't know what to tell you... no matter how low you tune it... the actual music is just bland.

Sorry, man, but DO keap at it.
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Invictious is back! with another of his brutal compositions! I have to say unfortunetly I don't really like this one i'm afraid lol.
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I already made the piece not follow the typical song structures, which adds an element of surprise into it already.

I don't remember using a riff over and over again either (Lamb of God anyone?), each riff was inherently different. How I keep on using RIFF - RHYTHM - RIFF - RHYTHM (note alliteration, creates rhythm) might have made it less interesting.

Thanks for your comments though. I will keep them in mind for me next one.
Join date: Jun 2006
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this is another one of your songs that has nothing. you seem to think that because its death and you want it to be 'brutal' you have to have no hooks melody or anything remotely like music in it. in my opinion you should drop the silly low tunings and come up with something people will enjoy listening to

also drop the silly names. they mean nothing
Join date: Jan 2007
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haha.. i loved the Drop Drop C. Except that its hardly possible to actually play it. And unlike ur ther songs. i actually listened to this one the wholeway through.. Nice brutal metal! Keep it up!
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Join date: Mar 2007
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dude, you're songs are just becoming more and more ridiculous. The tuning is just stupid, and the song is nothing but noise and random notes. The whole BR00TAL!!! thing is just over the top. Try to do something that is even remotely melodic. Listen to Death or Necrophagist, that's death metal. This was garbage. Sorry man, but I didn't like this at all.
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Come from a fan of extreme metal, grindcore, etc, any type of very music. I think that sucked, terribly. It's just random chromatic notes and crappy atonal harmonies and just shoving in as many tritones as possible. Even if you want to make your music "xBR00T4Lx", it has to be somewhat musical.
Join date: Jun 2006
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^ just because he tuned down and played random notes fast doesnt make it brilliant it doesnt even make it music its pure crap IMO but people here are way too nice just so they can get a crit back.

think about it this way if someone was playing that crap on a CD in your school would you go yeah man thats class,

i highly doubt it.
Valar Morghulis
Join date: Jun 2006
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Well... Twas ok... Listen for what it is and its not bad.

If you had an 8 string that could be done... Cause Meshuggah's in F# (F?)... You'd need a heavier gauge, but it's possible.
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Join date: Jul 2005
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horrible. drums were just the same symbol over and over again, guitar was random notes.

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what is the music theory and what does it teach you, like scales, solos, and to build speed???

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And TS, double drop C is CGCFAC, not an octave below drop C, just thought i'd tell you.