JimmyPage97
UG Member
Join date: May 2004
408 IQ
#1
Hey, I'm at it again.

Tell me what you think.



Constructive criticisms please, tell me what I could do better, but most of all...

Tell me what you liked, haha

Go back to my old threat "New Bundle of Experimental/Fusion songs" to get an idea of what my sound is.

Check out: "Ultimatum" - that's my newest one.

As always, provide me a link, and i'll crit you as soon as i can

-JP97
Attachments:
Ultimatum.zip
4/4 is just so boring. <_<
bakshandloomis
Ug's Metalcore fanboy
Join date: Sep 2006
519 IQ
#2
i thought it was pretty good. the solo could use a little work i think. it was a bit repetitive but it was good a riff so that didn't bother me. other than that i liked it.

c4c?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=604402
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killswitch engage has some dissonant riffs, they're kind grindcore tho

rodrigomierh
havok 32
Join date: Jul 2005
949 IQ
#3
I think you should work on the solo, because it doesn't stands out, also the intro gets a tad repetitive. i liked some of the transitions between verses and chorus, and the main riff is cool, just don't use it too much. cheers

mind critting one of mine? (choose from sig) thanks.