Demons&Wizards
ΔxΔp=ħ/2
Join date: May 2006
511 IQ
#1
Hey, this is my third song, but the song one thats properly structured, and lasts over 3mins.
I'm a fan of songs that have intros that have nothing to do with the main song (Pantera and Metallica have some songs like this) and so the beginning to this is in that style.
This song could be lenghtened, the verse riff could be played a lot more if i had some lyrics (it gets a lil boring just listening to it wthout, hence the short version). I need to extend the bridge and maybe the solo, also there is no proper chours.
The song is supposed to be fast and heavy, so no complaining that the solo didnt have any 'feeling' your suppose to mosh/air guitar to it!! Once i have learned to actually play it, it will have bends and whammy tricks, its just that guitar pro makes bends sound god awful! Also turn OFF R.S.E, it just makes it sound worse.
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In The Pit.zip
Elthran
ph34r t3h p1g30n!
Join date: Jun 2006
109 IQ
#3
With the intro, I did find the I IV V progression a tad predictable, but I liked the little fills in it as well. I loved the groove I heard in riff 2, especially in the last bar, reminded me of Pantera's "The Art of Shredding". I also liked the intro breakdown too,. The bridge is good too, reminding me of Metallica's "Seek and Destroy" at the start. Overall, good work. One thing I would like to hear is a double time verse riff, slightly like Pantera's "Domination"

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