guitarhero814
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Join date: Jun 2007
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#1
I wrote this not to long ago im not very talented to write a drum or bass part(cuz well i didnt want a boring bass part) if someone want to write either they may. thanks
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song 1.ZIP
Last edited by guitarhero814 at Jun 14, 2007,
ch715dallat
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#2
Hey man i did some drums for you they took me a while so i hope theyre good i thought its a great song i may aswell try improve it with some decent drums

only thing is you might want to change the presolo drums as you could make ones that follow the riff if you want. but yeah great song man.

Edit: i would call it modern rock
Attachments:
Premeditated .zip
Last edited by ch715dallat at Jun 14, 2007,
ouchies
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#3
i liked it a lot. very senses fail esqe. some of your harmonies were off though so you may want to listen to those again
mrpedestrian
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#4
How do you make it go from clean to distorted?
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hendo123456789
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#5
Nice. Only part that i didnt like was the slides in the first pre chorus i just didnt think they sounded good. The rest was good i think the solo could probably do with a little more melody to it but it doesnt really matter. Good effort 7.5/10
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terryn0
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#6
the drums give that much needed effect...props to both of you! =)
ch715dallat
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#7
Quote by mrpedestrian
How do you make it go from clean to distorted?


click the mixer button on the bottom toolbar and select change instrument. or press F10 i think
guitarhero814
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#8
oh and at the solo i forgot to put distorion guitar in the mixer button on the solo. i play my songs in rse mode so u can put clean and adjust the rse sound. and thats why the slides sound weird listen to it in rse mode they sound good in there. and if someone wants to put in a cool bass line theyre welcome too. thanks for all the input guys!
Last edited by guitarhero814 at Jun 15, 2007,
thesimo
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#10
i really liked this, only bit i could crit is the solo, bars 170 - 179, sounds kinda chromatic to me, and the slides as was mentioned above, but teh rest of the solo with the tapping sounded sweet, well done
basskicker
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#11
I don't write much but I tried to make you a bassline. tell me what you think.
Attachments:
Premeditated .zip
Last edited by basskicker at Jun 18, 2007,
kylendm
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#12
make it gp4 please
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