#3
it sounds kinda weird cuz i transposed it up to the 5th fret so i could sing it better, but im not sure i like how it turned out
#4
wrong strumming!
bad vocal timing + you kinda sing a different melody...

both for flake and wonderwall.
Last edited by dEipHoBoS at Jun 16, 2007,
#5
i thought it was pretty cool!
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#6
I thought while is was inaccurate in terms of covering the original, it was a good recording on it's on steam. I rather liked it.

In my opinion, work a bit on extending the vocals - you seem to cut sentences short a bit.

If you do that, and maybe a little more on the strumming - you're going to have a kickass cover on yyour hands.

On the whole gj mate.

If you can please crit my oasis cover https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=9773498#post9773498
Cheers
Hemant