#1
maybe they won't actually close the thread this time..

"friends are all we're ever gonna be" you told me
"you're nice and all, but it's we who I can't see"
I'm having trouble with that fact that I
thought I saw straight through you
I'll deny and I'll delay
and hope it wasn't the truth

and they say the third time was the charm
but the third time was a year ago
sometimes it gets so hard
I almost take you for granted
and I take it you were supposed to save my life
to save my life

walk the circle with me
again, again
I know it's odd so listen carefully
again, again
I'm getting deja vu
cause the chance I had is a girl just like you
almost like you

trade some eloquence for my mumbling
I only stutter 'cause I'm stumbling over an "I love you"
and I've spent hours thinking how to phrase it
one minute I'm laughing too hard to talk
the next thing I know I miss it
I miss it

so walk the circle with me
again, again
I know it's odd so listen carefully
again, again
I'm getting deja vu
'cause the chance I had is a girl just like you
almost like you

the summertime starts, but it slows me down
'cause I know now I won't leave this town
anytime soon, anytime soon
'cause I know now I won't leave you
anytime soon, anytime soon

walk the circle with me
again, again
I know it's odd so listen carefully
again, again
I'm getting deja vu
cause the chance I had is a girl just like you
almost like you
almost like you

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#2
nice. I liked the lyrics relating to love but w/out the cliches that r used to often.
(can someone critique mine? it's Can You See The Sky?)

so yeah... nice lyrics... i liked em.
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#3
wow.. this is the first song of mine that hasn't been considered cliche. I must be improving lol

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