#1
Yeah I need help thinking of a title for this. Throw around anything you think fits.


Pale skin, blood on the floor
Too long locked away
Everything is black and white
From absence of the days
Colour returns to the eyes
I'll finally get away

Return to the daylight
The wall of darkness falls
Broken chains around my feet
As the old ways call
Outside of the pain
And further from the hate
My heart is finally free
And true life can begin
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#2
suggestion: read the rules before you thread is closed
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#3
was there a theme to the song?
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#4
as in when yu wrote it?? did yu write about anything?
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after i wipe i look at the toilet paper. anyone else do that?


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hamburger. put your wang between your cojones and turn 'em sideways.


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#6
Um, well i didn't get it completly, but it sounded like your escaping from something, such as or pain (or both). so the title could be something like "breaking [escaping pain]" or something about feelings (hate). Idk just a sugestion..

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