#2
The beginning was dumb again, but from the first solo and on it was pretty good. It's much catchier then your other songs. I like this song much better. I think the most solid riff was the breakdown
#3
Everyone uses that intro, might as well. It's begins from boring, then it starts to build up. it's just an empty filler for people to well..set the mood, I tried removing it, sounded incomplete without it.
#4
thts quite nice (Y)
BUT i dont know how to put a gp5 file up in a thread to download
SUM1 TELL ME PLEASE
it ses INVAILD FILE TYPE .. the TWAT
#5
Quote by TriviumRamazing
thts quite nice (Y)
BUT i dont know how to put a gp5 file up in a thread to download
SUM1 TELL ME PLEASE
it ses INVAILD FILE TYPE .. the TWAT

Put it in a zipped file (right Click > send to > compressed folder) then you can uploaded it here.

EDIT: Too late, saw you're other threads
#6
i like most of your songs but im just wondering can YOU actually play all of this?
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#7
Thanks for your comments.
Yes, for most of the parts yes.
The solo was rather Sonata Arctica-ish style, so yea.
#9
I am too lazy to put in the real drums. If I did, it will take...3 more weeks to do. I mean, putting in drums is very laborious, and I don't exactly have 27 hours a day like other people.

and how do the riffs sound out of tune?
#10
The breakdown part sounds a lot like the main riff from that Lamb of God song "Laid to Rest".... Is it a coincidence? Or did you just jack it?
Signatures are overrated.
#11
I was listening to the song and I find it totally dissimilar.
The rhythm is the same, but again, just how many combinations are there, unless I'm making math rock.

The rhythm is not exactly the same anyway.