#1
I am new to this but here is my poem/song as i cant decide which it should be...

untitled

If all falls around you
Don't fall deep down
Do what you did
Keep going on with life.

Life won't stop for you
It keeps going when you fall
nothing you can do
Keep going even if you fail.

when you crumble
Fall down screeming for help
No one is listening
They got their own lives to hold up
Try climb up their scaffilding
Cut your wrists on sharp metal
you can keep holding on tight
But you won't get anywhere

Life wont stop for you
It keeps going when you fall
Nothing you can do
Nothing

People dropping at your side
Their faces turning pale
Everything starting to frezze
Even the tears rolling down your face
The blood in peoples vains
Making hearts slow down then finaly stopping.

Dont stop for life
for it wont stop for you
Keep holding on, never let go

Liife wont stop for you
It keeps going when youu fall
Nothing youu can don
Nothing you can stay
Nothing you can do.

feedback please..
Thank You
Last edited by Slash999057 at Jun 17, 2007,
#2
read the rules. if it has no name make it "Untitled"
Ticking away the moments that make up a dull day
You fritter and waste the hours in an offhand way
Kicking around on a piece of ground in your home town
Waiting for someone or something to show you the way
#5
Quote by Slash999057
edited now...

Quite bumping, and im talking about the Thread Title
Ticking away the moments that make up a dull day
You fritter and waste the hours in an offhand way
Kicking around on a piece of ground in your home town
Waiting for someone or something to show you the way