Pingis_Or_Death
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Join date: Dec 2006
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#1
This is my second Thrash/Death Metal song, tell me what you think! The solo is bad, but I'll improve it and make it longer eventually, it's supposed to sound off, like a slayer type solo
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#2
nice, i like the main riff especially
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Demolisha
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#3
I'm sorry but I didn't like it. It was too muddy sounding, and I couldn't understand the guitar. Maybe try changing the guitar distortion to a different setting.
kylendm
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#4
i loled at the solo and its ok...5/10
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Pingis_Or_Death
Lol Wut Ang Clan
Join date: Dec 2006
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#5
Quote by Demolisha
I'm sorry but I didn't like it. It was too muddy sounding, and I couldn't understand the guitar. Maybe try changing the guitar distortion to a different setting.

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leo_p8
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#6
I really enjoyed the riff that begins on bar 23.

That solo is... interesting... but I guess that if you just jerk the bar up and down that's sort of, kind, of like what you would maybe sound like.

The riffs were fine with me, nothing specially grand, or catchy, but I suspect lyrics would cover that pretty easily. My problem is the drums... they need to mark the time and accent the beats in the song... yours just sounds like a metronome smacking the snare every single beat. No, no, no.

Re-do the drums and this'll be quite good.
Pingis_Or_Death
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#7
Quote by leo_p8
I really enjoyed the riff that begins on bar 23.

That solo is... interesting... but I guess that if you just jerk the bar up and down that's sort of, kind, of like what you would maybe sound like.

The riffs were fine with me, nothing specially grand, or catchy, but I suspect lyrics would cover that pretty easily. My problem is the drums... they need to mark the time and accent the beats in the song... yours just sounds like a metronome smacking the snare every single beat. No, no, no.

Re-do the drums and this'll be quite good.

The drums were the thing that I put the least effort in...I kind of regret that now. Im not a drummer, so coming up with drum patterns is a bit hard for me. I'll try to redo them and make 'em a bit more interesting and not as monotone.
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Rapid_Fire
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Join date: Apr 2006
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#8
thanks for critting mine dude, i jsut listened to your song, it sounds pretty cool. i wana hear what it sounds like on guitar. the solo was cool haha, it sounded prettycrazy
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#10
It was two random tbh. It sounded like a bunch of riffs thrown together, and repeated way too much. No real structure to it. I didnt like the riffs much, too chaotic for me. The solo....ugh. Same as the rest of the song, way too random, just a bunch of notes, no phrasing to it.

You have to work on your phrasing and structuring man, seriously. Sorry :/
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#11
Quote by NovemberRain273
It was two random tbh. It sounded like a bunch of riffs thrown together, and repeated way too much. No real structure to it. I didnt like the riffs much, too chaotic for me. The solo....ugh. Same as the rest of the song, way too random, just a bunch of notes, no phrasing to it.

You have to work on your phrasing and structuring man, seriously. Sorry :/


Then you should see my first song Now that is just some random riffs thrown together...And yes, as I already have stated, the solo sucks, and I will change it. I just put it there because I felt it needed one, and I didn't have much time.
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