-Sidewinder-
Banned
Join date: Feb 2006
642 IQ
#1
The song is basically an instrumental outro...wasn't sure if dropped 1 step or 2 steps sounded better though...so i just went with 2 hah
Attachments:
Outro.zip
HorrorFiend
UG Newbie
Join date: Nov 2006
220 IQ
#2
sounds kinda fake haha no its good
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leo_p8
Registered User
Join date: Jun 2003
175 IQ
#3
I... it... the thing just bored me up until the electric guitars kicked in... and then it bored me again when it came back to the first riff (although, it bored me less the second time around).

It's just too repetitive... I know it's supposed to be the ending... the good-bye, or whatever... but you could say good-bye with a well written bass solo over-top of that... right? I just think it needs some spicing up, although the concept is really good. The section with all the electrics, for example, is still a repeated riff, but it sounds so much more interesting because it's not the same small movement in EVERY bar.

Anyway... that's my two cents.