#1
Deffinetley not one of my best pieces but I'm fairly happy with this song, here it is.... 'The Sun Shadowed Mountain'

Singing songs of rejoice
My heart believes the solar voice
As the sun rises over the hill
Within the valley there’s a frosty chill
The shadow moves across the mountain
Fire begins to fall
Answering the solar call

Frostbite ends with a steely breath
I have no life, I have no death
I am one with the sun shadowed mountain

The bird of fire leads me slow
Through the rain and the snow
Fire begins to fall
Answering the solar call
In the battle we will bleed
Riding forwards on mighty steed

Frostbite ends with a steely breath
I have no life, I have no death
I am one with the sun shadowed mountain
Raise your chalice my brother
Raise it high
To catch the fire that falls from the sky
#2
Oh man...
I really, really like it.
Dunno, but reminds me of Led Zep, maybe "Battle of Evermore".
Great song, would love to hear it when it's finished.
#3
Wow, really? thanks. I thought everyone would hate it
Raise your chalice my brother
Raise it high
To catch the fire that falls from the sky
#5
man ive gotta agree! its the kidna stuff i tend to write....only better!l love the chorus! sounds great
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#6
Reminds me of Dragonforce's powermetal.

decent stuff... but I've seen you write better... 7/10


add: the chorus is sweet.
Promises meant a lot back then.
#7
well this isn't bad for imagery. i'll give that to u. keep up the compositions my friend
#8
Its got a good feel to it
very well done
and if this is one of your worse pieces
you must be an excellent writer
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