#3
Quote by michal23
Hmmm, must say not really my type of music tbh, but I really liked the part just before and just after the breakdown, it stopped the song from being a bit too reptitive. IMO, anyway. Crit mine?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=9629387#post9629387

i know its too repetive i havent written any more riffs yet for it but thanks for your comment and your song is really good i like your use of bells and pianos its really full sounding
#4
it sounds very much copied off of unholy confessions
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#5
Quote by Nihil
it sounds very much copied off of unholy confessions

hmm..i did notice it sounds like the main riff played backwords but im not finished yet and i still need to add to it
#6
yeah, change it around a bit and it'll be good
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#7
Quote by Nihil
yeah, change it around a bit and it'll be good

thanx for your opinion