#1
hey guys, I just finished up a song called "the oration" it's the first song that I've recorded on my newly purchased 7 string.

so please tell me what you think... any kind of criticism is greatly appreciated.

Click Here and listen to "The Oration"


thanks!

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#2
That is seriously some sweet stuff I absolutely loved it The sampling in your songs just made my day!

Very different and very refreshing, a nice change from most of the rubbish that I've had to deal with in the last little while!
#3
I for one absolutely loved it, will be adding your band to my bands myspace, www.myspace.com/swornsilence
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If it has a good body, a nice long neck and 6 strings i'd hit it like Ron Jeremy on viagra.
#10
Good stuff man. The production is awesome, good mixing too. Not big fan of the tone though. Where's the vocals? All this needs is some low pitched and aggressive growls. Reminded me of Berzerker quite a lot with the sampling and all. Keep it up, great stuff!

Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=9594550
#11
crit as i listen..well...sample...sample..

WOW...that got me ...! nice start damn deep sound harharhar brutal
fast riff yeah man loving it really

well this breakdown at 2:something is a little to long IMO

ah done...

well i really loved it but the second half could need some really fast part again

yeah man gonna check out your other songs too
really liked it

edit:hm second song just stopped at 1:something..is that normal?
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Last edited by Eaglemania at Jun 19, 2007,
#12
yeh man i'd definitely get whiplash from listening to that sh*t, some damn fine headbanging music i must say
#13
Quote by Eaglemania
crit as i listen..well...sample...sample..

WOW...that got me ...! nice start damn deep sound harharhar brutal
fast riff yeah man loving it really

well this breakdown at 2:something is a little to long IMO

ah done...

well i really loved it but the second half could need some really fast part again

yeah man gonna check out your other songs too
really liked it

edit:hm second song just stopped at 1:something..is that normal?



haha thanks. I wanna definitely do more to this song before the FINAL version.
the second song was probably the intro track... so yeah, it's short.
#14
freakin schweet tunes guys thanks for leaving a crit on mine..

your tune reminds me of a mix between like.. really sick fear factory and morbid angel.

i wouldn't change a thing!

good work! :CHEERS:
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#16
listening...creppy beginning. sounds like war kinda with people in danger. gets heavy drumming going. good. really good sounds very death metal. Like Job for a Cowboy but way more organized. like the riff coming in. drumming and guitar are complicated but well organized. the second riff sounds dark. like it. waiting for vocals.....no vocals? this song is pretty good and deserves vocals. then it will be a good song. for now, pretty good instrumental song.

good job dude!
#17
Quote by Kivarenn82
freakin schweet tunes guys thanks for leaving a crit on mine..

your tune reminds me of a mix between like.. really sick fear factory and morbid angel.

i wouldn't change a thing!

good work! :CHEERS:


haha, thanks a lot man! haha I don't really listen to either of those bands as influence at all... but thanks I guess haha.

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cool woman talking at the beginning.. this is SOOOOOO heavy! Holy crap, you blew my HEAD off! Nice work... the drums are sweet too.
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thanks a lot... it's on a seven string tuned down to AEADGBE, that helps with the heaviness quite a bit haha. those drums took forever to program with beatcraft and mix and stuff. I'll definitely crit your stuff right after I finish typing this up... haha.

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listening...creppy beginning. sounds like war kinda with people in danger. gets heavy drumming going. good. really good sounds very death metal. Like Job for a Cowboy but way more organized. like the riff coming in. drumming and guitar are complicated but well organized. the second riff sounds dark. like it. waiting for vocals.....no vocals? this song is pretty good and deserves vocals. then it will be a good song. for now, pretty good instrumental song.

good job dude!


yeah, the beginning is a sample from the movie "V for Vendetta"... haha JFAC, they don't have much influence on my writing, but I must say their new cd is definitely a step (or 2) up from their old stuff haha. yeah there's no vocals because my vocalist lives about an hour away in the next town over... so he can't come up here much to record. it will eventually have vocals on it... probably sometime next week.

thanks to you all for listening!

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#18
hey man great track, i was just wondering though, how do you get that really deep bass blast at certain parts, like right at the beginining you have it, ive always wondered how to do that
#20
The 7 strings kick ass. I'm not a fan of the tone of your amps, but the riffing is pretty good. The drums are decent sounding. I really like the use of the 7 string man, I would love to have one to experiment with. The part around 1:50 gets a little repetitive, but it's a very solid song overall. The timing seems a bit off on one of the guitars around 2:20.

Extremely heavy, wow this riff rapes ass (3:00 ish). Very good job.

c4c?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=612399
#21
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Whoa, I loved the intro with the narrator and the backround medieval crowd etc..
****, nice drumming ffs, very nice producing and very nice sampling.. I liked the guitar riffage, very raw and mind blowing.
The panning guitars in the main riff very brilliant but the drumming (the blastbeat) sounded really fake, really..

Do you want me to play those drums for you and record them ??

Listen to mine and if you like the drumming, let me know.
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=612548
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#22
hey would you guys mind if i used a song of yours for my UG radio show? if i can, email me a song file with artist info and a brief bio if you coudl. Thanks!
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