#1
tell me what you think. I did it on my telecaster so it might sound alittle twangy because i currently have no strings on my strat. but ill gladly do it again on the strat when i get new strings


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#2
Dude...dude. How long have you been playing? That made my ears hurt, seriously. I don't want to be an asshole but it was...not good. I think your guitar was out of tune too.
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#3
Fraid I have to agree, I think you really need to work on keeping your bends in tune, if you did that, itd sound a hell of a lot more professional.
#4
The high bit was out of tune and there was some timing issues as well. It seemed rushed all the way through, but somehow behind the beat
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#5
ive been playing alittle over a year

i guess ill never get better.
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#6
Yeah turn down the distortion on your guitar. The song is pretty clean to begin with and the distortion takes away from the feel.

Give it a re-record and ill give you a better crit.
#7
You will get better, you just gotta slow down, and practice. Maybe try something easier first... Don't climb Everest if you can't climb the garden fence.
#8
im talking about hendrix's cover of it. not Creams version. hendrix's one has the fuzz pedal and wah in it and its not too clean. ill re record it later