here goes my 2nd work pleaze give your opinions because we're starting a band so need listeners opinions.

and do NOT pay attention to the names because i press whatever q can while saving my work :P LOL!
Hmm, well it's not bad. I thought verse one were pretty decent and i liked verse two better but i didn't really like the beginning of the chorus and the part at bar 90,94, ect. the Solo was pretty good but a little repetitive might wanna work on that. The interlude want half bad either. Maybe a 7/10?
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