#1
This is a little acoustic progression for a song I'm currently working on.

RHYTHM: About 67 BPM, First chord = 2 counts, Second = 2 counts, Third = 4 counts.

Any type of criticism is welcome.

D5 A B

D5 B D5

D5 A B

G Gb5 D5

(D5 = xx023x and Gb5 = xx467x)
It's difficult to win unless you're bored.
#2
hmmm... I think most people here will be too lazy to figure out the song by playing it (including me ). I recommend you, to use a tabbing program like Guitarpro or Powertab (free), tab your song in one of those and then come back, you'll get much more crits . Good Luck
Last edited by rodrigomierh at Jun 20, 2007,