#1
Hey.

Pretty proud of this tbh. Kinda metally thing with a cool chord progression. It's kinda long but ya know... Crits please.

Btw I will crit back if you leave a name/link :P
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Teh Gearz:

Cruiser Stratocaster
Feng Ling G15 Amplifier
Digitech Grunge Pedal
Daphon E20PH Phaser Pedal
#3
First thing I noticed was the same name as a Trivium song, soI thought it woul dbe some Trivium style tune. I was pleasantly surprised that it wasn't

The acoustic intro sounds prosmising but the song it's self is fairly boring, especially the octave part before the fast PM'd bit, it sort of sounds random. Most of the riffs sounds pretty similar too.

I liked the 'breakdown style' riff.

Good work, has potential. Mix it up a bit :p

Mark
#4
Cheers Mark. I don't like that octaved riff anymore either, but it sounded good when it came to me lol. I will improve it, and thanks for your advice man :P
Quote by MightyAl
I lean towards Butthole Surfers because only a butthole would carry a surfboard around a town.

Teh Gearz:

Cruiser Stratocaster
Feng Ling G15 Amplifier
Digitech Grunge Pedal
Daphon E20PH Phaser Pedal